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emsley

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Ok you may or not know that i currently working on material for my future band.

Lets see how deep your knowledge of words go?

 

ill start it off then you will get the idea?

 

 

lets start with a chorus....

 

slowly my mind escapes....

slowly i glide.....

softly and suttle my mind is brittle...by the back lash of the paaaaastttt :D end chorus

 

Thre was no escape you knew it all along....like a trap entised it deslised my yearning for better "learning" of myself

My heart pumped diamooonds, my thoghts grew wickid.....it turned to poison

the unkown curosion that bleeds inside known as...you carry on for the first verse?

 

If there are no new posts i will carry it on :shock:

I got a feeling i will be the only one posting.hehe.

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slowly my mind escapes....

slowly i glide.....

softly and suttle my mind is brittle...by the back lash of the paaaaastttt end chorus

 

Thre was no escape you knew it all along....like a trap entised it deslised my yearning for better "learning" of myself

My heart pumped diamooonds, my thoghts grew wickid.....it turned to poison

the unkown curosion that bleeds inside known as...[go fast now im metal style]

LIFE!! Sound,souloution,draw your conclusions,intice, my nameeeeeeeee in VAAAAIN!! [imagine heavy single sets or drum bass]

Feelings and thoghts, interwind,shamed whos to blame anybooody buuut yoouuuursellfff, i know because i feeeeel it toooooo.

:shock::D

Operssion anybody else wanna own me?

this is it my "set" i am done, my healed wound beeeecomeee undone

you never knew it.,... but you weaved itttttt!!!!!

 

 

 

Ok two more versus with 2 sets of choruses and an outro and we have are selfs a very good metal style lyric base :D

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I make an entry :shock:

 

 

It's true, we've welcomed a new era [fast solo]

It might very well be a miracle [fast solo]

We might not ever be able to taste it again

Remember it once more...

 

The day I was born on this earth

I was no doubt happy in a way...

And at the same time no doubt sad

I was crying, after all

whOoa yeaah whOoa yeaah (slight pause) whoa whoa whoa (slight pause) yeeeah.

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