Shoma Posted April 18, 2007 Author Share Posted April 18, 2007 Judging by that dog that was in that chapter; guess I"m in this crazy story. Interesting story though.lol, nice deduction; was beginning in to think yagami was my only reader^^>. Then again, that would be enough as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elazul Yagami Posted April 19, 2007 Share Posted April 19, 2007 i'm your only reader that comments on each chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucandrake Posted April 19, 2007 Share Posted April 19, 2007 I would comment but I just want more chapters . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shoma Posted April 20, 2007 Author Share Posted April 20, 2007 (edited) OKay, i hope i did this right, because i wanted yall to see what i saw in my mind. but i'm not sure. I'm using this chapter to see how well i can portray a fight scene.CHAPTER 6 RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 6 : Old friendly brawl!Summary:FIGHT, FIGHT AND FIGHT MORE! GameCop just attacked one of the lackeys who are working for the mastermind behind his mutiny. This sparks a 3on1 brawl, only after GameCop finds out who is behind these strange attacks. We see one of GC's custom made moves!New faces:GAryOak99, Disoblige, Madman Edited April 20, 2007 by Shoma Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diso Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 Nicely Done. I liked it even though I got my butt kicked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elazul Yagami Posted April 20, 2007 Share Posted April 20, 2007 nice, but when do i show up again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shoma Posted April 22, 2007 Author Share Posted April 22, 2007 (edited) Alright, finally broke the 4,000 word barrier.....YAY!Anyway, i was wondering is there any suggestions for chapters 11 and up.MY plan sheet has up to ten for now. GUess it will be my first saga or volume.I already have the ending planned out but there has to be some suspense in the middle. Dbz does the whole suspense thing pretty well.BTW, could you all picture how the fight was going down in your head in the fight scenes? Edited April 22, 2007 by Shoma Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elazul Yagami Posted April 23, 2007 Share Posted April 23, 2007 more or less yes, but mainly because i know the avatars.if i didn't it would've been confusing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mooney Posted April 25, 2007 Share Posted April 25, 2007 I just started reading these, and I must say I find them very interesting. Keep on writing! BTW, chapter 3 wins the most. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shoma Posted April 27, 2007 Author Share Posted April 27, 2007 I think this is my longest one, but um yeah! ENJOY!CHAPTER 7 RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 7 : Genesis!Summary:Finally! A little insight to the origin of the city, 1emu! This explains who the mutineer is and how things went down and why GC was so shocked when he received a note from the three fighters. It's kinda long and i even put in a song describing the emotion. Right after GC blanks out, he dreams of the beginning and you will see the truth...sorta! New faces:solidius23(He's just mentioned) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DropDeadEd Posted April 27, 2007 Share Posted April 27, 2007 I think this is my longest one, but um yeah! ENJOY!CHAPTER 7 RELEASED!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chapter 7 : Genesis!Summary:Finally! A little insight to the origin of the city, 1emu! This explains who the mutineer is and how things went down and why GC was so shocked when he received a note from the three fighters. It's kinda long and i even put in a song describing the emotion. Right after GC blanks out, he dreams of the beginning and you will see the truth...sorta! New faces:solidius23(He's just mentioned) You have a new character for the next chapter. Hint hint. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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