My first Sprite...help? Advice?

[xXxAyaxXx]

I really dont know if I post this kind of thing here but um, if not just tell me and I will remove ASAP.

 

I am pretty much new to this I always loved the look of 2D games probably because I draw allot and I thought I would give making a sprite a shot. I really cant seem to get ah old of making them smaller. I don't know how to explain like, umm..less detail? I don't know. But I am pretty much open for advice on my work. This is my first 2D sprite, also it is not finished I want to get advice before I finish it, hopefully the advice is fixable on my crappy work >.<

 

 

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c303/Sec.../Diefighter.jpg

 

 

I would also I like to add I am not claiming this character in any way but I do

claim the work itself ;;

Also that is Daisuke from Dir en Grey so...yeah.

[darkstalker]

I really dont know if I post this kind of thing here but um, if not just tell me and I will remove ASAP.

 

I am pretty much new to this I always loved the look of 2D games probably because I draw allot and I thought I would give making a sprite a shot. I really cant seem to get ah old of making them smaller. I don't know how to explain like, umm..less detail? I don't know. But I am pretty much open for advice on my work. This is my first 2D sprite, also it is not finished I want to get advice before I finish it, hopefully the advice is fixable on my crappy work >.<

 

 

http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c303/Sec.../Diefighter.jpg

 

 

I would also I like to add I am not claiming this character in any way but I do

claim the work itself ;;

Also that is Daisuke from Dir en Grey so...yeah.

 

 

ugly but looks cool though i dont know more shade to fill in

[Mooney]

Dude... read the dates on posts before making a reply. It might be ok if you had something useful to say, but, well, you didn't.

[darkstalker]

Dude... read the dates on posts before making a reply. It might be ok if you had something useful to say, but, well, you didn't.

 

roger that