1emu adventure has been launched! (earth two)

[Fatal Rose]

Chapter 1

http://www.1emulation.com/forums/index.php...;blogid=45&

Please let me know what you think of it, I personally am not happy with it, but I had to get something going. Said I was going to post it over two months ago I think.

[Jitway]

I like it. The line "Online joke chat sometimes carries over to real life" is very fitting. I also like the fact that I am the stranger hiding in the dark....sinister.

[Diso]

I like it. Kinda weird seeing my persona in a story but you captured it pretty well. Keep going.

[Sybarite Paladin AxL]

Lol I'm not that pesimistic . Arrogant as fvck but I'd cheer on Diso fun read yo

[JKKDARK]

Where's JKKDARK?

[Fatal Rose]

Thanks for the feedback everyone.

[Lucandrake]

its certainly more upbeat then shomas lol

 

But it's nice , keep it up .

[Shoma]

its certainly more upbeat then shomas lol

 

But it's nice , keep it up .

^^ Thanks Dave!

 

I too enjoyed it! A style that gives more of a "I would totally do this if I was there" kinda feeling when you read it.

....."lasted five seconds" lol

Edited January 18, 2008 by Shoma

[Fatal Rose]

http://www.1emulation.com/forums/index.php...p;showentry=350

BlackKnight is officially the co-writer now, expect much bigger and more impressive/epic stories to come.

I would publicly like to thank you BK, without you the story is trash.

[Diso]

Whoo. Drunken master ftw.

Story seems to be going along fine and captivates my interest (I don't think it's trash). Hope you continue to update the story with help from BK.

[Sybarite Paladin AxL]

lol oops, sorry jitway xD