Fatal Rose Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 Chapter 1http://www.1emulation.com/forums/index.php...;blogid=45&Please let me know what you think of it, I personally am not happy with it, but I had to get something going. Said I was going to post it over two months ago I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jitway Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 I like it. The line "Online joke chat sometimes carries over to real life" is very fitting. I also like the fact that I am the stranger hiding in the dark....sinister. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diso Posted January 18, 2008 Share Posted January 18, 2008 I like it. Kinda weird seeing my persona in a story but you captured it pretty well. Keep going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybarite Paladin AxL Posted January 18, 2008 Share Posted January 18, 2008 Lol I'm not that pesimistic . Arrogant as fvck but I'd cheer on Diso fun read yo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JKKDARK Posted January 18, 2008 Share Posted January 18, 2008 Where's JKKDARK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fatal Rose Posted January 18, 2008 Author Share Posted January 18, 2008 Thanks for the feedback everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucandrake Posted January 18, 2008 Share Posted January 18, 2008 its certainly more upbeat then shomas lol But it's nice , keep it up . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shoma Posted January 18, 2008 Share Posted January 18, 2008 (edited) its certainly more upbeat then shomas lol But it's nice , keep it up .^^ Thanks Dave! I too enjoyed it! A style that gives more of a "I would totally do this if I was there" kinda feeling when you read it......"lasted five seconds" lol Edited January 18, 2008 by Shoma Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fatal Rose Posted January 20, 2008 Author Share Posted January 20, 2008 http://www.1emulation.com/forums/index.php...p;showentry=350BlackKnight is officially the co-writer now, expect much bigger and more impressive/epic stories to come. I would publicly like to thank you BK, without you the story is trash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diso Posted January 22, 2008 Share Posted January 22, 2008 Whoo. Drunken master ftw. Story seems to be going along fine and captivates my interest (I don't think it's trash). Hope you continue to update the story with help from BK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybarite Paladin AxL Posted January 22, 2008 Share Posted January 22, 2008 lol oops, sorry jitway xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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