Shoma Posted May 23, 2011 Share Posted May 23, 2011 Hey, so I'm about half way finished with this book I'm writing and by half I mean I wrote about 17 pages and afterwards, I will write about 17 more. If I cant fit what I want into it then I will mak a contuation because I have enough ideas for about two or three books.Anywho, just for a summary, it's a superpower type action novel similar to 1EmuAdventure series I posted on here and the only thing they share is the lack of realism in fights. Now my main concern is when I read books(mostly best selling books) the exposition, or the set up that leads to the action, is always so drawn out. It goes on for about 4-7 chapters before anything adventure-ish happens. Now these are biggest gripes with adventure books but what do you all think? I prefer some action upfront and then sprinkle information/story with action when I read. I dont mind throwing extra exposition in there but I dont what your average reader likes, other than myself. More concerns to come.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weirdy Posted June 5, 2011 Share Posted June 5, 2011 From what I've read, good setups have to develop gradually. If you want to drag them out longer, then they have to be worth the wait. I think Frank Herbert did this well in the Dune series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shoma Posted June 14, 2011 Author Share Posted June 14, 2011 From what I've read, good setups have to develop gradually. If you want to drag them out longer, then they have to be worth the wait. I think Frank Herbert did this well in the Dune series.I'm going to look up that book, is that a mystery?I've always heard about Dune but never got into it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weirdy Posted June 15, 2011 Share Posted June 15, 2011 No, it's science fiction. Takes place maybe 25 or 30 thousand years in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shoma Posted June 28, 2011 Author Share Posted June 28, 2011 If anyone is very famliar with action/adventure/sci-fi books, I would like to send you my first chapter to get your impressions. There's no one i know who reads adventure let alone sci-fi books. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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