The Official Poems Thread!

[Cominus]

Rose are red

Viloets are blue

this shizzle is whack

and so is this thread

i come from the streets

iv'e been in the hood

flock this shizzle

im going back to school. Word....

Edited March 30, 2004 by Cominus

[ForceX]

Rose are red

Viloets are blue

the shizzle is whack

and so is this thread

i come from the streets

iv'e been in the hood

flock this shizzle

im going back to school. Word....

HAHAAHA That was off the shizzle for hizzle Cominus

 

WORDLIFE

[ForceX]

When Your Hero Falls

 

when your hero falls from grace

all fairy tales r uncovered

myths exposed and pain magnified

the greatest pain discovered

u taught me 2 be strong

but im confused 2 c u so weak

u said never 2 give up

and it hurts 2 c u welcome defeat

when ure hero falls so do the stars

and so does the perception of tomorrow

without my hero there is only

me alone 2 deal with my sorrow

your heart ceases 2 work

and your soul is not happy at all

what r u expected 2 do

when ure only hero falls

[AntiWinner22]

This is a pretty sad one, so get those tissues handy:

 

As the white on my face blankets itself,

I see a picture of Meryl; staring at me -consoling me- above a shelf.

As I stare into her eyes, my own slowly digress

To my crimson hands, to my crimson lips, to my crimson chest.

The digression of my eyes leads to the digression of my mind as well.

Of what I dreamt, I will tell:

 

In my restless dream, I saw the latter portion of my life.

No childhood memories, No fond friends, No family to recall;

Only a woman, standing in front of a car, standing about five-and-a-half feet tall.

 

She smiled. Smiled a smile that glowed more than ten suns combined;

That smile extended from beautiful ear to beautiful ear.

Her body gracefully courted one's emotions.

She was as soft and calm as the waves of the oceans.

Nothing compared to her radiance.

 

Not burning flames wrestling against the eternal blackness up above.

Nor the timeless motion of wings gliding, caressing the air, dove after dove.

 

Nor roses in the wake of a fallen sky.

Nor the citrus glare from the vast blue before its final slow dissipation and decay.

 

Time, time, TIME!

It stated drowning me, pushing me downward, down, down, down…

Three iron hands -each with different strength-

clutched my jugular, crunching, breaking, contorting…

 

I awoke!

Horrifically, I felt a grip protruding out of me.

Then, out of the cornet of my eye, Meryl formed into a self.

Her smile, her glow, her curves, her flesh…

Her lips parted, she began to speak…

She spoke with the softness of Down.

It impaled me, severing my body, permanently tying me to the ground.

She sang to me, lulling my senses, intoxication my hearing, poisoning my cerebrum.

 

A myoma grew, my mind was ceasing, slumber soon will come.

The final words from my beloved resonated inside my head

Every word, every syllable, struck me like a bat. This what she said:

 

“Here's a lullaby to close your eyes,

It was always you who I despised.

I don't care enough for you to cry.

Here's a lullaby to close your eyes.”

 

If you notice, there are elements of games there. See if you can catch them

 

Anon.

[Alpha]

Here's another one I made since I'm a big fan of the song..

"Stairway to heaven" - Led Zepplin

I think I got the lyrics wrong on a part though, who cares..

 

Sing with me,

With a louder tone and a drum stick slapping the drum,

Feel the beat vibrate through your body,

 

Sing for a year,

With a guitar stroke and chimes slapping each other,

Your mind setting the throttle to the climax,

 

Sing for last,

The heart of your feels like it will stop fast,

The beat gets harder and harder,

Your would stops at your feet,

For the soul wants more,

 

Sing for her,

Screams louder, heart pacing at its max,

Drums dribbling and guitars at its highest note,

The peak of the song is here, do you hear it….

 

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Well there you go, this is a music poem incase you didn't know. I'm not a poet or anything, I just saw Havoc Forums with their poems section and I thought of making a thread like this. I've also visited a couple of poem forums to get ideas. If you can't make a poem, just try slapping some words together. And don't forget to read the board rules, I've already had to delete one poem.

[Cominus]

Rose are red

Viloets are blue

the shizzle is whack

and so is this thread

i come from the streets

iv'e been in the hood

flock this shizzle

im going back to school. Word....

HAHAAHA That was off the shizzle for hizzle Cominus

 

WORDLIFE

LOL, you flocking said that wrong, it's off the hizzle for shizzle "off the hook for sure" not off the shizzle for hizzle. No worries, a polar bear would have corrected you anyways. Make a poem about Polar Bears and how they eat seals or something.

[Gryph]

If you can't make a poem, just try slapping some words together.

Set the trap

Take a nap

Draw a map

Oh, I'm such a sap

I fell for my own trap.

[Agozer]

If you can't make a poem, just try slapping some words together.

Set the trap

Take a nap

Draw a map

Oh, I'm such a sap

I fell for my own trap.

I'll slap some words together

To see if something comes up

No, this is like trying to paint avant garde

Nothing works or makes sense

Touché

[ForceX]

Rose are red

Viloets are blue

the shizzle is whack

and so is this thread

i come from the streets

iv'e been in the hood

flock this shizzle

im going back to school. Word....

HAHAAHA That was off the shizzle for hizzle Cominus

 

WORDLIFE

LOL, you flocking said that wrong, it's off the hizzle for shizzle "off the hook for sure" not off the shizzle for hizzle. No worries, a polar bear would have corrected you anyways. Make a poem about Polar Bears and how they eat seals or something.

I meant to right it backwards ....its my spin on the Snoop Dogg Language...

[Dragus]

My Haiku Collection

 

 

Grand Central

--------------

Away from the swamp,

Into a tranquil meadow,

I enjoy with you.

 

 

Growth of Beauty.

------------------

From rivers to plains,

Flourished sakura blossoms,

Gaze and kiss so sweet.

 

 

Distance no bound

----------------

A bond upon truth,

Lives disregard of distance,

You are in my heart.

 

Guardian

--------

As far as you are,

Distance can bar no limits,

I am here always.

 

Comfort

--------

Nearby when you sleep,

A warm hand through the cold night,

Never let you fall.

 

Nature's Chaos

----------

Snow falls and sun shine,

Altering to rain droplets,

Yet the cold wind bites.

[Gryph]

I just wrote this while I was in Microbiology class.

 

I call it Antibiotics. It's very geeky and very psuedointellectual.

 

Antibiotics

 

Vibrio, E.coli, Salmonella

How terrible these bacteria are.

Poison my food, poison my water

Antibiotics, they don't matter.

 

Endotoxins, exotoxins

Cause diarrhea or even a coma

Unclean oysters, undercooked hamburgers

Antibiotics, they don't matter.