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Hmm... u guys r good so i'm gonna try to make a poem too

 

Ryu and ken

hittin each other with Shouryuken

fighting their best they can

later on Akuma comes in

and the whole scene gone dim

cuz Akuma just used the raging demon

and busted every 1 like a lemon

 

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i got roms, smc, bins, gba, and iso's

i love my emulation more than h-oes

 

from MAME to NeoRage

i play my games all day

 

i love emulation with a passion

much props to those who do the hackin'

whithout them none of this would happen

so y'all stand up and shake their hand

and don't forget to celebrate with a heineken

 

some day i know cps3 will be emulated

so as of now i'll chill and pray for that day

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Hmm... u guys r good so i'm gonna try to make a poem too

 

Ryu and ken

hittin each other with Shouryuken

fighting their best they can

later on Akuma comes in

and the whole scene gone dim

cuz Akuma just used the raging demon

and busted every 1 like a lemon

 

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This one is the better of the two. I like it. But I don't know jack crap about poetry as you can see from the 2 poems that I've posted.

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thanx Mr.K.but i think ur poem just need to rhyme more then it would work but now it's kinda stupid. altho it's pretty good if u don't know jack crop about poetry

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thanx Mr.K.but i think ur poem just need to rhyme more then it would work but now it's kinda stupid. altho it's pretty good if u don't know jack crop about poetry

Poetry doesn't have to rhyme...that's such a 4th grade mentality. :lol:

 

I know about the mechanics of poetry, but I don't know how to write it. And that's a big difference. Knowing how it works and actually getting it work are two different things.

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just so u know i'm still in 8th grade and i'm chinese so my english skills sux but anyway what u said is true ( knowing it don't mean u can working)

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just so u know i'm still in 8th grade and i'm chinese so my english skills sux but anyway what u said is true ( knowing it don't mean u can working)

Oh really, I didn't know you're Chinese. Your typing style is just like that of the average American teenager, but without all those insipid lols and Zs and Xs. Your English isn't bad at all.

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